Sunday, May 13, 2018

OUGD603 Brief 08: Responding to Feedback

Responding to Feedback:

From the feedback I received I have started to adjust the design playing around with type size and putting the text closer together whilst keeping the layout the same.



Mockups:







Feedback:
- Resistant has been spelt wrong so needs changing
- Preferred the smaller logo - felt that it works more appropriately
- Preferred the logo and the '30' at a similar size so that when people become more familiar with the brand that will be the first thing that look for.
- Close gap between 'sun protection' and 'broad spectrum'

Based off this I have made adjustments to the last design as I feel that this is the most appropriate.



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